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the night I met you was the night of emergence
and when I awoke at dawn you were beside me trembling,

trembling at the tired spectacular:
the blessed universal

trembling at the blithe parodic
of our sacred accidental

trembling at the sole lachrymose word,
the gentle aubade of this beautiful cycle,

trembling with the earth, your own green firmament,

consciousness an angelic hypnosis: what a show


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in springtime and in fear of death
you were beside me trembling at being essential

and I could barely contain my laughter

Edit 4.25.12:
Cut mostly everything.
Tell me what's missing

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Edit 4.21.12:
Just realized this is the same as this:
[link]

Damn.
I know I kind of have a crush but damn.
Silly emotions. Fly away and bring him to me.


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is the ending sincere or sardonic?

I want no other weakness [link]
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dweckie's avatar
Wow. This is truly beautiful :heart: